Thursday, May 24, 2012

[Novel] Prologue V2

I am deleting my old posts and re-writing my story.  My writing style has evolved quite a bit since I started this story, and yet again, it needs to be re-written.



Prologue
  The night roared.  A young lady ran, grasping at branches for support and hopping to avoid insidious roots.  To simply say she was running would be misleading for the half sprint, half scramble was the kind of running your body can only do when fueled by stark, unrestrained terror.  Behind her a large willow tree splintered in half from the blade of one of the dark horsemen.  The black sword swallowed the light around it, engulfing what little light permeated the thick canopies above.  His horse, a dark, thick black beast, had eyes that glowed red—unnatural, and full of wild fury. 

  Tears fell from the young woman’s large aquamarine eyes leaving trails of cleared dust.  Blood trickled down her arms from where she had thrown herself through a barbed thicket moments before.  Despite the overwhelming fright of the situation, in the back of her mind she knew she could not afford to fail.  For the world as she knew it would forever fall into chaos.  She focused her mind and turned around to face her attacker.  Silently, she muttered a few words and threw her hands in front of her.  As she did so, water began to coalesce out of the air into long pointed masses.  Ice crept along the globules turning the floating water into deadly blades of ice.  She lifted her head and looked into the black lifeless eyes of the horseman.  “Shardstorm.”  The words came like a torrent of power from her mouth and activated the spell.  The magic enhanced ice easily shredded the man’s armor and mortally wounded him, throwing him off his steed.  Without a moment’s stalling, the young lady turned around and once again continued down the thick, forested valley.   She had now killed two of them:  The Dark Order.  The first had fallen prey to a hastily placed ice trap she had cast after escaping their lair.

  She hadn’t planned on discovering them; she simply was exploring the forest south of the Grand Capital, Alestia and came across an unusual gathering of rocks.  As she neared she had noticed some magical barriers around them and curiosity had overwhelmed what little sense of self-preservation she possessed.  Indeed, she was somewhat of a reckless child, but her aptitude and skill in magic had kept her both safe and well over confident.  Using some magic threading techniques she had disabled the traps and entered the cavern as the rocks parted.  There, tucked in a corner at the top of the cave, she had learned dark secrets and plans that threatened the peace of the entire nation.  They discovered her spying as she tried to escape back out and began the deadly chase.

  Her mind now raced, trying to determine an escape.  Killing two of them would hardly slow the chase, but it bought her some time.  Ahead, a small clearing in the woods opened up.  A large sword crashed through a tree to her left and she dashed out of the forest onto the banks of a large lake.  Two more riders behind her slashed at the foliage to get to her.   Quickly she scanned the banks.  To her despair, hundreds of dark clad wizards and archers began to emerge along the lakeside.  She had run out of options and dove into the lake.  An arrow zipped past her thigh as she swam, clipping her skin and drawing blood.  Another arrow pierced her shoulder and she gasped, nearly losing all her oxygen.  Her blood floated up around her.  If she came up for air, she knew, she would die. 

  And so she turned to her final and most desperate resort.  The spell was forbidden, and by all rights she should never have known of its existence.  Her adventurous curiosity had uncovered more than a few hidden secrets.  She recited the complex spell in her mind, taking care to set the spell up carefully.  Slowly, each cell in her body began to freeze as the time-defying spell froze her legs, then her arms, then her chest and finally her head.  Her consciousness began to fade as she poured the last bit of magic into preserving her life.  Her body, devoid of any air, sank to the bottom of the lake, far away from the light of the sun.  Her mind began to black out as questions floated through her head:  Would she ever be found?  Would she be found in time?
 
  The dark order checked the shores thoroughly for any sign of the intruder.  Blood was found on the surface of the lake and the young girl was declared dead and the search called off.  As quickly as it came, the darkness that made the pitch black night look bright faded away into the dark forests.

    In the dark the maiden lies,
                With secrets black, the frozen sighs
                Until the time, The Weaver’s fight
                Will shatter then—eternal night